Heart's Path

Well, it's a good go. But I'm not fully confident the retro-game theme is applied at its best here, if you want the honest opinion. It's pretty basic, which can be good if presented or structured in an otherwise eye-catching way, but I don't quite feel it here.

And again, I still don't feel right naming it simply "Heart's Path." It's like, while the "My" might make it seem too personalized, it's that personalization it implies that makes it seem distinct and meaningful. It's not just "destiny." It's "my destiny." It's the path I follow...the path my heart leads me. I'd imagine a monologue or something leading up to the mentioning of the title.

I appreciate the thought that went into this though. Even is I don't end up willing to make a change, it at least gives me some level of self-affirmation in case I second-guess myself. The more I look into something, and it still seems right, the more I believe it's the way to go. Yet it never hurts to experiment. :3