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OK... OK... I'm going

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Finally able to post something I can at least deem as "presentable". My drawing hand is very out of whack. I was inspired to draw this after Parlare did a Twitch stream playthrough of Star Fox Adventures.

It's a rehash of an older drawing I did when I first joined DeviantArt.
OK OK... I'm going by NS-Games
I honestly think the old version looks better. But in any case. This is meant to be the shot of Fox McCloud taking a look back at Krystal in the first scene he encounters her from Star Fox Adventures. And yes, it's in colored pencil. I tried to use an inking pen for the outlines, but I seemed to have failed miserably. :XD:

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I can see that this is a re-draw of an older piece, and you've managed to improve heavily since! One thing I must point out is the coloring. It's really messy and has very little to no consistency. The line work is pretty sketchy and could improve by working a bit more diligently because to me, sketchy messy lines = laziness.
You captured the character pretty decently and did a good job on the anatomy for the most part. The sword seems to be bending, but that's not that big of a deal.
But yeah, this isn't half bad.
Keep up the good work!